Four minutes

Four minutes of gap
Without thinking of you
Since the very start of my day

Four minutes of peace
My mindless anxiety put out
And the pain left behind

Four minutes of freedom
Almost nothing for anyone else
A huge step forward for me.

hbhatnagar March 18, 2015 / 1:58 pm

Beautiful. I long for four minutes…I fear four minutes too.

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- HeavyCloud March 18, 2015 / 1:59 pm
  
  Thanks a lot, my friend.
  
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sonyaliraphotography March 18, 2015 / 6:16 pm

Beautiful.

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- HeavyCloud March 18, 2015 / 6:17 pm
  
  Thanks! 🙂
  
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Cobblestone March 20, 2015 / 4:14 pm

Like that the start of it can be read in several ways – and the strong direction it takes. Good one.

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HeavyCloud March 20, 2015 / 4:36 pm

Thanks a lot!

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