Against the wall

June 22, 2015HeavyCloud

Curiosity is over
Challenged by time
Passion has gone
Lost in a rhyme

Internet lovers
Easy to find
Against a wall
Craze of our times

“A serial thriller”
And no more to take
Between your pictures
Just new hearts to break.

chrisnelson61 June 22, 2015 / 5:11 pm

Disturbing times, really: have we replaced intimacy with a screen? I saw a documentary recently about young men in Japan who were conducting ‘relationships’ with virtual women. Bizarre and worrying. Well put, and I like the rhyme which carries this poem effectively.

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- HeavyCloud June 22, 2015 / 5:13 pm
  
  Unfortunately I have been there somehow… Thank you Chris.
  
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arcade1775 June 22, 2015 / 5:11 pm

awesome poem. very melancholy

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- HeavyCloud June 22, 2015 / 5:13 pm
  
  Thanks a lot, Arcade.
  
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derrickjknight June 22, 2015 / 5:18 pm

Poignant, indeed.

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calensariel June 22, 2015 / 5:50 pm

Sad… And, unfortunately, true for a lot of folks.

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- HeavyCloud June 22, 2015 / 5:50 pm
  
  Yep…
  
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YesterdayAfter June 22, 2015 / 9:48 pm

Cyber reality could be thrilling and destroying at the same time…

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Miss Evelyn June 22, 2015 / 9:49 pm

There is only so much to break….;)

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- HeavyCloud June 22, 2015 / 9:49 pm
  
  😉
  
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YesterdayAfter June 23, 2015 / 11:37 am

Ciao, I created a Digital Art using your full moon I hope that you like it. Please let me know what do you think…

http://yesterdayafter.com/2015/06/23/digital-art-moon-on-water/

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