Whirlwinds

The whirlwind of my thoughts
Swirls around his core, and there is you
Who helped me in rebuilding my life
And then pulled the main brick out of it

The whirlwind of my words
Still attracted by the black hole where you
Who could discern the sadness in my smiles
Have disappeared without a trace.

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4 thoughts on “Whirlwinds

  1. mscolebaby April 9, 2015 / 7:24 pm

    I love the line “and then pulled the main brick out of it.” What a clever way to paint that picture. You said it all in a few short lines

    Liked by 1 person

    • HeavyCloud April 9, 2015 / 7:27 pm

      Thanks a lot. That’s what happened, almost literally. So I just had to transcribe… 🙂

      Like

    • HeavyCloud April 9, 2015 / 8:28 pm

      Life sometimes is. Thanks a lot for reading!

      Like

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